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So this was supposed to be done forever ago. I'm here for your prize for winning Feedback Frenzy loooool. Sorry this took SO long, my life totally got away from me :'(

Anyway, let's begin!

I am not a digital artist so the following critique is based off opinions and not experience :heart:

Vision - 4: I think you had a really good idea with this, with the details of the flowers and fire and arrows. I think your design is lovely! I've never read/seen the Hunger Games, so if these symbolize something, then you're awesome at including those! ;D

Originality - 4: I don't think I've seen anything like this before, so I'd say this is pretty original as far as fanart goes.

Technique - 3.5: I really like the way you drew the bird thing in the background, the arrows, and the bow, and her body is drawn very well! However I do think that the nose is a bit long and that the corners of her mouth could be more straight. Also, the hair seems to lie a bit flat on the head, but I'm used to seeing Manga drawings so I'm sure that's why I made that observation ^^ Otherwise, this is really good! Way better than I can draw, heh ^^;

Impact - 4: I think the background really takes the cake on this one. I love your coloring on everything except her hair, it seems like it's just missing a little...pizzaz. I dunno. But otherwise, this image is very well done.

So this has been my critique, I hope you enjoyed it, and I deeply apologize for how late it was!!! Rahhhh my life totally escaped my grasp. I hope that this was what you were looking for!

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TAHernandez Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for taking the time to critique this! You made some really good points and I appreciate your comments. :)
petits-bonheurs Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're very welcome! :D
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