So this was supposed to be done forever ago. I'm here for your prize for winning Feedback Frenzy loooool. Sorry this took SO long, my life totally got away from me
Anyway, let's begin!
I am not a digital artist so the following critique is based off opinions and not experience
Vision - 4: I think you had a really good idea with this, with the details of the flowers and fire and arrows. I think your design is lovely! I've never read/seen the Hunger Games, so if these symbolize something, then you're awesome at including those! ;D
Originality - 4: I don't think I've seen anything like this before, so I'd say this is pretty original as far as fanart goes.
Technique - 3.5: I really like the way you drew the bird thing in the background, the arrows, and the bow, and her body is drawn very well! However I do think that the nose is a bit long and that the corners of her mouth could be more straight. Also, the hair seems to lie a bit flat on the head, but I'm used to seeing Manga drawings so I'm sure that's why I made that observation ^^ Otherwise, this is really good! Way better than I can draw, heh
Impact - 4: I think the background really takes the cake on this one. I love your coloring on everything except her hair, it seems like it's just missing a little...pizzaz. I dunno. But otherwise, this image is very well done.
So this has been my critique, I hope you enjoyed it, and I deeply apologize for how late it was!!! Rahhhh my life totally escaped my grasp. I hope that this was what you were looking for!
Sta.sh
Anyway, let's begin!
I am not a digital artist so the following critique is based off opinions and not experience
Vision - 4: I think you had a really good idea with this, with the details of the flowers and fire and arrows. I think your design is lovely! I've never read/seen the Hunger Games, so if these symbolize something, then you're awesome at including those! ;D
Originality - 4: I don't think I've seen anything like this before, so I'd say this is pretty original as far as fanart goes.
Technique - 3.5: I really like the way you drew the bird thing in the background, the arrows, and the bow, and her body is drawn very well! However I do think that the nose is a bit long and that the corners of her mouth could be more straight. Also, the hair seems to lie a bit flat on the head, but I'm used to seeing Manga drawings so I'm sure that's why I made that observation ^^ Otherwise, this is really good! Way better than I can draw, heh
Impact - 4: I think the background really takes the cake on this one. I love your coloring on everything except her hair, it seems like it's just missing a little...pizzaz. I dunno. But otherwise, this image is very well done.
So this has been my critique, I hope you enjoyed it, and I deeply apologize for how late it was!!! Rahhhh my life totally escaped my grasp. I hope that this was what you were looking for!
=petits-bonheurs