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Submitted: October 1, 2012
Image Size: 4.9 MB
Resolution: 5184×3456
Submitted with: Sta.sh

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS REBEL T3i
Shutter Speed:1/1024 second
Aperture:F/2.8
Focal Length:50 mm
ISO Speed:800
Date Taken:Sep 30, 2012, 8:16:16 AM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS5.1 Windows
Sensor Size:22mm

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twenty.twoby =petits-bonheurs

Photography / Macro / Objects

I took a couple of photos for

for part of a commish, and I thought I'd publish this outside of my Sta.sh

I would LOVE critiques/constructive comments. Please don't feel shy, as long as you're tactful and nice about your corrections, I'll always be willing to listen!

EDIT: I played with the background - what do you think?

I can send you this version too watermark-free if you like this one better

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Canon Rebel T3i/600D
50mm
Macro filters (I forget which combination I was using here

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Construction paper (black for background and cream to reflect light to the back of the flower)
10$ Small shop light from Home Depot

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Critique by `Infinite-Heart Nov 11, 2012, 5:38:29 PM

Lovely colors and contrast here, I love the composition too.
The sharpness and detail are lovely, however, the piece is a bit soft, and I think that a bit of sharpening would be good.

The depth of field is good, but the softness towards the back is slightly distracting from the rest of this gorgeous piece.

I also think you could crop out the left slightly. This would center the piece more.

I really love that shade of blue and the feathers. A really nice touch there.

Well done, keep up the good work.

It's a lovely flower indeed. c: