I took a couple of photos for for part of a commish, and I thought I'd publish this outside of my Sta.sh
I would LOVE critiques/constructive comments. Please don't feel shy, as long as you're tactful and nice about your corrections, I'll always be willing to listen!
EDIT: I played with the background - what do you think? I can send you this version too watermark-free if you like this one better
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Canon Rebel T3i/600D 50mm Macro filters (I forget which combination I was using here ) Construction paper (black for background and cream to reflect light to the back of the flower) 10$ Small shop light from Home Depot
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Lovely colors and contrast here, I love the composition too. The sharpness and detail are lovely, however, the piece is a bit soft, and I think that a bit of sharpening would be good.
The depth of field is good, but the softness towards the back is slightly distracting from the rest of this gorgeous piece.
I also think you could crop out the left slightly. This would center the piece more.
I really love that shade of blue and the feathers. A really nice touch there.
The sharpness and detail are lovely, however, the piece is a bit soft, and I think that a bit of sharpening would be good.
The depth of field is good, but the softness towards the back is slightly distracting from the rest of this gorgeous piece.
I also think you could crop out the left slightly. This would center the piece more.
I really love that shade of blue and the feathers. A really nice touch there.
Well done, keep up the good work.
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